My Very Special Person

Who is very special to me?

Task:  Write about someone who is very special to you and create a picture of this person in the reader’s mind.

My dad is the stinkiest person in the world when he farts.  He smells like rubbish.  His eyes are blue and he has black sweaty hair and the longest legs ever.  His feet smell like rotten eggs from being locked up in boots with old ripped socks all day at work.  He has muscles.  He is special to me because he takes me out hunting with him.  He takes me rabbit shooting with his 22 - duck shooting, geese hunting and heaps of other hunts.  He loves going hunting, but the best he likes is duck shooting.  He wakes up early in the morning or goes when he comes home from work late at night.  I like my dad because he is genius.

Written by Luka

My name is Daniel.  For me I have two families.  They are the Nicholas’ and the Eyles’.  I love the Nicholas’ because they got me a remote control car.  They are special to me because I love, miss and like them.  I have visits with them at McDonald’s.  I have two sisters and one brother.  I see them sometimes.  I love my brothers and sisters.  I will never forget them.

Written by Daniel N.

Tiffany is my mum.  I love my mum.  She has hazel eyes and black hair.  My bubbly mum is a bit tall, she smells really nice.  Hilarious Mum loves me so, so much.  I love her as well. It’s a nice time having a good mum.  Sporty Mum can play games with us and help us in sport.  Mum can bake cup-cakes with us and cakes and cookies.  Awesome Mum is caring, sweet, funny, serious, and thoughtful.  She loves gardening, reading and cooking.  Tiffany is special to me and I’m special to her.  I help my mum when she needs help.  I love my mum in my very special life.

Written by Oscar M.

My cool friend is called Riley.  He is really nice to me.  We’ve been friends for 3 years.  He has blond hair with a speck of brown at the bottom.  He has blue eyes and is really tall.  He is special because he plays cool games, intelligent and exciting and knows a lot about dinosaurs.  He likes to play imaginary games, go on his tablet, play Lego Heroes and he gets invited to parties.  He also likes playing with toys and having play dates.  We do a lot of talking.  We play funny games.  We have so much in common.  When we have play dates we get bats and hit thistles.  He is my best friend.

Written by Fred

Bunty is my special person.  She is my grandma.  Bunty has grey curly hair and wrinkly skin.  She smells like nice strawberry medicine and has a sweet, light voice.  Bunty is special to me because she made my dad, and I love my dad.  She likes to stop and smell the flowers and sit in the sun all day.  I like to cuddle my grandma and spend time with her.  Her personality is sweet and quiet-natured.  I’m lucky because I have a kind and caring grandma.

Written by Kadi

Hi, my name is Hugo and I have a very special person to share with you.  His name is Sean.  He is a very special person to me because he does stuff with me, like build a wooden helicopter and a sailing boat and lots of other stuff.  My dad has blue eyes and dark hair that is very spikey.  He has bruises all over him.  My dad likes to go surfing with me at Ocean Beach and sometimes we go mountain biking too.  That is why I like my dad.

Written by Hugo

Grandma Eileen is a special person to me.  She is around in her 60’s and has light ginger hair.  Grandma does not live far from Rotowhenua Road.  She lives in a calm, peaceful area with 2 dogs, Kate and Tom.  I like to have sleep-overs at her house and have her read ‘Grandpa’s Slippers’ to me in bed.  She is special to me because she is very old and kind and caring.  My grandma likes to let the dogs out of their cage to water the flowers.  Grandma sometimes calls me ‘Charlie Brown’.  When Grandma comes to our house she gives us lollies and she watches me on the trampoline.  I think that my grandma smells like soap from all the soap she has!  I think my grandma is very nice.

Written by Leo 

Flip is my granddad.  He is tall and playful.  I used to see him every day but now I only see him once a week.  You might think he is mean, but he is not mean.  He is sweet, caring, kind, humorous and bright.  He likes playing cricket with me.  He always treats me.  I am a spoilt kid.  He always takes me shopping with him.  I think I have the best granddad.

Written by Joey

Samuel is very nice.  He has blue eyes and blond hair that is getting darker.  He has glasses.  They are red and black.  We are twin.  Samuel has asthma.  Samuel has a lovely smell, like soap and toothpaste.  Samuel is very special because he likes singing in the toilet and the shower and Samuel plays tricks on me which he finds hilarious, but I get so cross.  But I don’t care.  Samuel loves eating salt and lollies.  Samuel and me love going to the beach, playing on the swings, but the thing we hate is going to bed – only when it rains.  Samuel is very smart.  He knows a lot about dinosaurs.  Samuel has two personalities – being kind and caring and being so annoying.  I feel so lucky to have a twin brother

Written by Georgia

I like my aunts because they are fun to play with.  My aunts are called Melissa and Denise.  They live in America.  My aunts smell like shampoo.

Written by Daniel M

My parents’ names are Rachel and Richard.  They are kind, friendly, sweet, lovely and funny.  Mum and Dad have brown hair.  Mum has blue eyes and Dad has brown eyes.  Mum smells like flowers and Dad smells like deodorant.  My mum likes to go shopping with me.  Dad likes to do gardening.  We go on bike rides together.  Mum’s personality is sweet and cheerful.  They are special to me because they care for me and are supportive to me.  They are my special people for life.

Written by Zoe

My special person is my mum.  She has blond hair and blue eyes.  She smells like girl deodorant.  My mum likes to do her garden lots.  She likes to play soccer in the paddock with me.  My mum is so sweet, lovely and kind because she loves me.  She’s kind to me because she helps me with my homework and to do the chickens.  I love being with her. She’s a ‘happy-chat’.  My mum’s friendly to other people.  I love my mum.

Written by Persaous

My dad is special because he is kind.  I like swimming in our pool and watching movies on our big screen.  He is special because he works and earns money so we can go to places.  He looks muscley, huge and fast.  My dad acts funny.  I love my dad.

Written by Jake

My cousin is very special to me.  She is called Zoe Faye Bodlock.  Zoe has brown eyes and brown hair.  I don’t get to see her much because she lives in Wanganui.  She is 8 and her birthday is on the 27^th of December, two days after Christmas.  She is very friendly to me.  We like making witchy potions.  Lollies are her favourite food.  She doesn’t like tomatoes, but I do.  She smells very fresh.  She is agreeable.  Zoe is very special to me because she is the best cousin of all!

Written by Lillie

My special person is called Jacob.  He is my brother.  I don’t see him much because he lives in Wellington.  He is so special to me because we go out and he hugs me and stuff.  Jacob has blond hair and blue eyes.  Jacob likes to go out and watch cricket with his cousin or go shopping with his friends.  Me and Jacob like to go to Skate Zone.  Jacob smells like deodorant and men’s perfume.  Jacob is out-going, crazy and helpful.  I love my brother.

Written by Alex O

My grandma is a special person to me because on my birthday, even though I don’t see her on my birthday, she sends me a letter and a present.  She normally goes to the South island.  Sometimes I talk to her on the phone.  She is a bubbly, funny person.  She has a croaky voice, but sweet.  She smells beautiful and is always lovely.  She is a kind and caring person.  She loves me and my family.  She has a little house in Ohope.  I love her.

Written by Rose

My mum is very special to me.  She has red-brown hair and green eyes.  Her name is Andrea Lee Hickey.  We go on shopping sprees to K-Mart, The Warehouse and Number One Shoes.  Mum has a sweet, powdery, soft perfume kind of smell.  She does not wear high heels very often.  My mum is lovely, kind, caring and generous.  When we have cross country, swimming sports and athletics she always comes along and when it’s my turn to do something she always stands up and cheers me on all the way to the finish line.  She is very friendly all the time.  If she is very proud of me, which she usually is, she gives me a humongous hug and lets me have an ice-block or a biscuit.  My mum is my favourite person in the world along with my sister, dad and loads more people.  I love my mum!!!

Written  by Alex H.

This special person is my brother Lars.  His smell is stuck in my head all day.  Lars smells like Nivea men’s deodorant.  He’s handsome, pimply and spotty with a red nose.  Creepily manly is what Lars sounds like.  Lars is special to me because he is fun, strong, he’ll play soccer with me, he’ll help me with my butterfly (for swimming) and whenever I’m sad he’ll cheer me up.  This special person likes to play on his iPad, play soccer, play on the trampoline and swim.  I like to do everything with Lars because he’s mine.  Lars is friendly and my brother, which I love.

Written by Sabine

My special person is my big brother.  He is funny, hilarious, sometimes silly and sweet.  I share with him.  He is the most friendliest person I know.  He’s super sweet.  I love him.  Innes, he has yellow hair.  I do too.  We have blue eyes.  My brother Innes, he likes to play Play Station.  We do it together.  I eat pop-corn.  Innes likes to eat it too.  We play nicely together, although we fight sometimes, more like a lot.  Innes is nine years old, nearly ten.  He talks heaps.  Every time he talks I get bored and more bored.  On Easter my brother helps me find Easter eggs.  Innes is creative but he never does art or drawing.  His mind is over taken by technology.  We grow flowers.  We are quite into nature.  I love him so much.  We love each other.  We play Teachers.  Innes is the teacher.  He is my special person for life!

Written by Abigail

Sam, my brother, is my special person.  He has hazel eyes, browny-blacky hair and is quite short.  My loving brother is special because he is going to high school soon and he helps me do things.  We like to play Star Wars on our iPads and watch Star Wars on the T.V.  Sam likes to play Star Wars with two bats pretending to be a Jedi Knight and a Sith Lord at the same time.  His personality is playful and funny because he likes playing jokes and playing with people his age.  Well, Sam has lots of personalities really, but his best one is being active just like me!  My brother smells like shampoo and cat because he pats Thomas all the time.  On Saturday’s he scoffs his chips down from the big bowl into his stomach.  Saturday’s are awesome movie nights!  On the week-end Sam uses most of his time playing with his tiny bits of Lego, which Ruby sometimes attacks and starts chewing.  We like making animations with Mum’s camera.  Chocolate, lollies, ice-cream and Toblerone chocolate are his favourite treats.  Pizza, pasta and potatoes are his favourite meals.  My life is amazing with Sam!

Written by Amy

Emma Yeats, my aunty, has black hair like licorice.  Her eyes are as blue as the sparkling sea, skin as soft as peaches.  I like the way her dress swishes in the wind.  She is special because she can make me laugh whenever I’m around and she’s always supporting me.  She likes to do baking, like making cakes and all that sweet stuff and she loves the Eiffel Tower.  Whenever I’m with her she takes me to the same awesome cafes and takes me to the amazing TePapa.  The inspiring Emma is always hilarious when she is talking to me about when I was little.  I feel like a very special kid!!

Written by Jordis

My mum looks young. My dad looks old. My mum and dad are special because they buy food for me.  They do fun stuff with me.  My mum likes going to Splash Planet.  Dad likes going fishing.  I am lucky to have a mum and dad.

Written by Oscar A.

I have a little sister and she is a toddler.  I love my little sister and she loves me back.  She smells pretty and she smells like fresh flowers.  Emma and me play together with the toys and we play with the cars.  I am proud I have a little sister.

Written by Leighton

My grandma gave us two really cool toy bullet guns and she is a helper for Santa.  She loves making presents.  They have an R.V. and we are going to be there for three weeks and we are going to go on a boat to the pond. They are great and we are going to go through deserts and over-seas.  They are extremely good at making presents and they have a present maker.  That’s why I love her.

Written by Connor

My wonderful sister Georgia is playful, hilarious, kind and humorous and last but not least, she is bubbly.  She has got hair to her waist.  She has got purple glasses and brown hair and she is pure and she smells like soap suds.  Georgia is special to me because I can trust her.  She helps me and Georgia plays with me and talks to me.  Georgia likes to sing, dance, play Barbies, and she plays the piano.  The things I do with Georgia are – play on the swings and we ride the bikes.  Georgia is the best sister in the world.

Written by Samuel

My special person is my grandma.  Her name is Grannygan. She is 70 years old.  She lives in Christchurch.  She loves chickens, she has about 50 of them.  She has curly hair and green eyes.  She is special because she looks after me when I go down to the South Island.  She is married to my Granddad Doc.  I like to go on picnics with my sisters and family.  She likes to ride horses.  I love my grandma.

Written by Henry