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Sunday 14 June 2015

More Poetry - Diamante Poems this time!



A Diamante is a seven-line, diamond-shaped poem which contrasts two opposites.  It follows this format:  First Line and seventh line - Name the opposites.   Second and sixth lines - Two adjectives describing the opposite nearest it.  Third and fifth lines - Three verbs (ing words) describing the nearest opposite.  Fourth line - two nouns (if possible) for each of the opposites. (This is the transition point where the poem changes from one of the opposites to the other)



Sharp.
Edged, sharpened.
Cutting, scratching, piercing.
Shiny sharpness.  Dull bluntness.
Rounding, smoothing, levelling.
Rounded, thick.
Blunt.
Written by Joey

Fun.
Mrs Anderson, fitness.
Reading, writing, performing.
Running sports. Lunch-club, T.V. ads.
Spelling, changing, walking.
Practice, jokers.
Boring.
Written by Sabine.

Flower.
Beautiful, glamorous.
Budding, blooming, glowing.
Pretty display.  Over grown.
Spreading, annoying, growing.
Ugly, shabby.
Weed.
Written by Georgia


City.
Busy, bright.
Partying, illuminating, dancing.
Vibrant life.  Peaceful space.
Relaxing, growing, breathing.
Clean, crisp.
Country.
Written by Alex H.


Cats.
Fluffy, silky.
Yowling, purring, scratching.
Mice, birds.  Meat, biscuits.
Chasing, chewing, barking.
Playful, furry.
Dogs.
Written by Amy


 Healthy.
Good, energetic.
Running, living, challenging.
Keeping busy.  Couch potatoe.
Munching, bad-living, unchallenging.
Bad, slow.
Unhealthy.
Written by Kadi


Sky.
Up, high.
Flying, watching, moving.
White grass.  Green grass.
Rumbling, shaking, rumbling.
Animals, people.
Ground.
Written by Kadi


Hot.
Burns, sparks.
Flaming, rising, hurting.
Blazing fire.  Frozen frost.
Freezing, numbing, chilling.
Cools, ices.
Cold.
Written by Jordis


Cars.
Shiny, smooth.
Revving, racing, roaring.
Big sedans.  Muddy motors.
Moving, speeding, frightening.
Bright red.
Motorbikes.
Written by Samuel


 Fire.
Hot, steamy.
Boiling, burning, flaming.
Gas cooking.  South Pole.
Freezing, snowing, chilling.
Frozen, cold.
Ice.

Written by Hank



Happy.
Cheerful, friendly.
Laughing, skipping, chatting.
Smile, joy.  Tears, woe.
Crying, walking, whimpering.
Lonely, excluded.
Sad.

Written by Amy













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